Be Honest...!!! (Demo)

[metronome]

Hi I know if do this before but heres a demo that I record a couple of days ago, the drumset that I used was a:

Yamaha Maple Custom Vintage 22x16,10x71/2,12x8,14x12,16x14 with a Noble & Cooley Alloy Classic 5 x14 snare drum with Zildjian cymbals 2 crash K Custom 17" & 18" hi hat K Custom 14" ride K Custom Special Dry Ride 21".

So please be honest in every way of the demo, it is worth it?

Thanks and God Bless.

Ralph

P.S.
Your soon answer on this matter will be really appreciatted, because of time frame for sending this demo to a couple of people.

Thanks Again...

Ralph Cabrera

Here's the link:

http://s37.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0...42E8Y3RMRAOV6C

[sjj123]

links not workin'..maybe thats why no responses

[XNavyDrummer]

Nice track! Digital drums?

[metronome]

man no is not digital drums it's me playing oh God do I sound so awfull?

[metronome]

Andy is me playing do I sound so bad man?

[XNavyDrummer]

No, the sound is good! Perhaps it's the precision playing that made it sound like it might be from digital samples.

(In my punk days, the bass player from the Pistols heard my playing and thought it was a drum machine.)

Good job! Very solid playing!

[piccupstix]

Sounds great to me. Very "atmospheric." [img]smile.gif[/img] Nice and tight with the bass too. Good work!

[Klemme]

Very Nice playing. Very solid playing and you have a nice and relaxed groove. But ! ! ! ! In the Outro, I would really like you to go on the Ride! You keep a very steady rythm pattern, but the rest of the Music doesn't. I'm not telling you to chance pattern every time you go into a new Letter, but again, it's very important to listen to every aspect of Melody phrasing to comp them and make every phrase they're meant to play (Especially the horns) Sense. As a Erskine says, Serve it on a silver-plate.

I would like more Dynamics actually, You're playing great but it's rather monotomous when you go into the Chorus, you just keep on going in the same groove and state of mind. I would like a more organic progression in the tune. But that's a personal oppinion and i'm just a silly Dane! [img]graemlins/thumbs_up.gif[/img] [img]biggrin.gif[/img] [img]wink.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/beer.gif[/img]

<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ November 04, 2005 03:14 PM: Message edited by: Klemme ]</font>

[sjj123]

Yep....she's workin'....don't know what happened the first time around....sounds great

[metronome]

any more input?
PLEASE